summarise feedback from my tutor

  1. how can sound more impact ?
  2. question
  3. which way can influence people? how many?
  1. Changing my question to :
  2. Finding the strong story and telling my facial problem story : The online media coverage of seemingly ideal beautiful women affects how my facial attractiveness is self-perceived. My eyes are considered to be never big enough, and face never small enough in comparison with the broadcasted ideal types. No sooner had I adjusted to this cultural shock, than I had a ferocious facial allergy last year resulting in a permanent reddish and swollen face. I was so unconfident to expose my face that wearing a hat and sunglasses became part-and-parcel of my life for the past year. Looking back at this tormenting experience, I realise how significantly the self-perception of facial attractiveness influences the self-esteem of a female. The aim of this study is to advocate that plastic surgery is not a singular mean to enhance facial attractiveness. This will be done by showcasing other viable means, e.g. by applying makeup, to effectively elevate facial appearances.
  3. Making the audio shortly, the recorded interview has been condensed to be 1 minute.
  4. Testing audio: stakerholders and people work in different industries were invited to listen to the interview and leave their comments.
  5. Intervention app: an online platform is being developed to invite people who are not confidence with their facial beauty, share each other story and interact.

 

Current intervention issue: I can invite a lot of people into my account and i can talk each other , but I can’t put them together to talk and listen to the audio at the same time.

Question : still need to develop it

Audio testing feedback: according the shakeholder’s feedback, I’m consider should use audio and photos( compare photos in two different way)

 

 

 

NEW INTERVENTION—NEW APP

Due to my own problems, I am not very confident about my appearance. For example, my eyes are not big enough and my face is not small enough, especially when I am influenced by the fashion entertainment scene. My skin causes no surgery, so I’m looking for other ways to enhance facial attractiveness besides cosmetic surgery to help a new generation of young people (aged:15-30) to increase their awareness of the beauty and discover their own beauty rather than singleness Worship a kind of beauty.

This is a new APP that  I created.  want to use this app to create  a community to invite  people who are  not  confidence with their facial beaut, share each other story and interface people.

APP dress: http://cs.velo.top/customerService/commonAccount/dialogue/#/ ( only phone)

current issue: I can invite a lot of people into my account and i can talk each other , but i can’t put them together to talk and listen to the audio at the same time.

 

Therefore,  i find the new app which i can use it as a base area to built my community.

I used this app to create  a community (opening the talking room 实时的)and invited someone who are interesting this topic or they can enter my community when they saw it and  to listen to the audio and then communite.

Intervention process

  1.  New question: How can Chinese women gain confidence in relation to their facial attractiveness using non-surgical methods?
  2. Finding the strong story and telling my facial problem story: Last year, I had a very serious allergic reaction on my face. Every day, my face was red and swollen, and I had to wear a hat when I went out. This situation lasted for more than half a year, and I was not confident.
  3. Making the audio shortly,  I edited it to 1 minute.
  4. Testing audio: invite stakerholder and some people work in different industry  to listen the audio, give me feedback.
  5. Intervention app: creative a community to invite  people who are  not  confidence with their facial beaut, share each other story and interface people.
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Evidence:   

Translation: 1. about language, you should think someone do not understand      English

2. They thought the intervention can be improved by content with a story and the demonstration of the intervention can be carried out on social media app to better spread its influence.

Tutorial meeting —-Richie

  1. First problem is: my MA question is quite long, should be short.                             my question is : how can the facial attractiveness of Chinese  women be increased through  non-surgical methods in order to improve  confidence and satisfaction of Chinese young people in their own beauty?  
  2. My project content should tell stories to audiences,and how to use the power stories to spread and influence the audiences?
  3. For the intervention, should I create communicate as a digital app.